It’s rumored to be so simple to reveal a secret crush,
Let the words flow naturally, and enjoy the rush.
Theres a certain someone, who for quite some time,
Has intruded on my fantasies and corrupted my mind.
It happened so suddenly. I saw your face in passing
Eversince I imagined you thanking me for asking:
If we can just spend some time, kick back and catch a flick
Laugh at inside jokes while the clock on the wall tocks and ticks.
No need for cell phones or watches and no care for the time,
I’ll be guessing your thoughts that are guessing mine.
Of course it wouldn’t be too lady-like to say it just so,
I guess I’m old fashioned. I want you to take control.
I wonder what it would be like if we shared a passion,
All this and more on mind, when I see you in passing.
Maybe one of these days I’ll work up the courage to say “hello”
You might reply with a “hi” and then courters’ chemistry will flow.
Tomorrow look for the cutie with the curly hair
Consider giving her a wink to interrupt the shared stare.
I’m sure she’d be thrilled if you asked her name,
You’ll say you’ve had a crush. She’ll say the same.
I’m talking in third person it’s hard to believe it’s real.
I’ve never had such trouble, saying what I feel…
In terms of writing and style, the poetry rhyming scheme
donates a quiet unfolding of the words, which plays beautifully against the message in the poem. Moreover, I have a great shared experience with this author’s message, it is rare to find someone who has not experience the thrill of temptation, but the harrowing experience of defeat and rejection. However, your poem ends with a feeling of hope, and perhaps wish fulfillment .
S
I am anxious to find out whether the will be returned,
This leaves a warm feeling of hope.
Continue your writing. It will certainly keep people inspired to continue to return to your page.
M
Loved it. And agreed..what they said ^ ^ ^
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